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The Birthday

Ahhh (shouts) Blood. I saw blood dripping from my hand.
Help! Can you please help me? (sobbing)
No? (shocks) You won't?
I asked for help but everyone ignores me like I don't exist
I'm bleeding
People think I'm crazy (laughs) I'm crazy
I'm not like this before, you wanna know why?
I saw it but I can't do anything because I'm scared
Are still gonna blame because I left my parents behind? Tell me!
It's just a nightmare but why it becomes real

It's 12 midnight
It's so dark
I saw a light. I follow the light.
Ahhh! (shouts) My mom and dad were lying on the bed. 
Cold, pale, blood, blood
No, no No they're not dead!
Noooooo!
It's just a nightmare, Calm down.

It's already 7 in the morning
I can't wait to blow my candles mom
Dad?Mom? Where are you?
Answer me please.
I found no answer.
Ahaaa! Are they going to surprise me on my birthday?
Ohh! How sweet.
I decided to search all over the house.
I already open two doors but still they are not here.
There's only one room left.
Shhhh! It's my parent's room in the count of three I'll open the door
1 2 3 
Let me do this again
1 2 3 
It's still the same
No my dreams can't be true
I walk towards the bed, shaking, trembling
My parents were dead. Why? Why is this happening to me?

I heard footsteps
I got panic. I turn around.
I saw the killer with a knife on his hand pointing to me
Don't go near me! Don't go near me!
Don't!! I run
But he hrabs my hair
Ahhh!
Who would not gone crazy If your parents were killed on your birthday

I heard voices. They're calling my name
Grace! grace!
Ahhh! Stop! Shut up! Leave me alone!
Leave me alone!
Leave me alone!
(LAUGHS)
Don't Laugh !






Thanks to my classmates who critique this piece and to all the bosses around that really help me arrive this kind of piece. Special Mention to Edelito Flores, Mary Alve Morgia, Ma. Lourdes Agoot and etc. for always being at my side. Muah





 
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